I loved the lyrics, tempo and emotional intimacy of this song. The vocal was also spot-on and really did a masterful job conveying the song's message. I especially loved the musical changes in the bridge and felt that it was one of the stronger components of the song as a result. It accomplished what bridges are supposed to accomplish, which is a rare feat. My only nit is so small it's hardly worth mentioning, especially in light of how strong this song truly is, but like Scott I had a bit of a bump with the use of the word "than" in the fourth line. My computer would have placed a green line under it suggesting that it might not be entirely grammatically correct. I loved the connection of these two lines, however. Very powerful.

Very good song with tremendous potential and I wish you nothing but success with it.