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Afro Pop
by Raymond Byabazaire - 10/01/26 12:39 PM
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Afro Pop
by Raymond Byabazaire - 10/01/26 12:38 PM
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Gone
by Michael W. Brown - 09/30/26 07:17 PM
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Mara Cole
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Nat,
The idea of using wrong as a rhyme for dawn never crossed my mind seeing as wrong has an inherent negative connotation and I was looking for things that would encompass what lovers would say when together or apart, hence the lonely soul in the last line of the first verse.
I'm not trying to be contrary or dismissive of your input. That is just the way I wrote it and I like it.
Not many offerings by amatures and hobbyists are perfect on the first go 'round and as Tammy has mentioned, we had one shot with and took it.
Thanks for your thoughts and impressions. You do have some good thoughts here. I do hope you enjoyed the song.
Danny
The heart has its reasons, of which reason knows nothing of." —Blaise Pascal, 1670
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