Originally Posted by JAPOV
Just a thought....

A cigarette and a shot of rye remind me who I am
Gone is that wonderland that filled my childhood dreams
Lovers, fools, unpaid dues and no tears left to cry
Mum n Dad's loving wish wont get you far it seems...

On a side note, the whole "going into debt to chase a superstar dream" motif is kind of odd to me. To simply mention a childhood dream of stardom is more universally relatable I believe. I think this should just be a story about "growing up". Perhaps a story about getting his Dad's old guitar out of the pawn shop would be an interesting angle? Just an opinion. Nice harmony smile


Thanks Japov for taking time to have a read/listen and for your thoughts. You have given me some food for thought.
I will dwell on it for a while and also see what others say.
It is JaneK doing the vocals and it was her who did the music/melody. Good job.

God Bless Roy

Last edited by Roy Cooper; 06/27/19 07:17 AM.
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