Originally Posted by Dave Rice
Morning, Roy: (...and Jane, by default)

Roy, it's so good to see you posting again. You have been missed here at JPF more than you'll ever know. Thanks, Jane... for dragging Roy back into the "limelight" again. This is a really good start for a co-write.

I listened and thought the mix needs a little "adjusting" to get Jane's vocal "pulled up a notch or two." It is often "drowned-out" by the music. Great "first take" and I look forward to hearing what the two of you do with it. I won't suggest any lyric changes... you have some previously posted thoughts and ideas to consider.

Wishing both of you success and all things good! ----Dave


Thanks Dave for having a read/listen. Pleased that you liked our first draft co-write. Now comes more work...lol
Mind you my friend, after the number of co-writes I have had over the years, I knew what to expect.

Yes please watch this space for re-writes

God Bless to you and family

Roy

'You Have To Kiss A Lot Of Frogs To Find A Prince'