My first co-write since Helen

Re: My first co-write since Helen - Our Video Roy Cooper #1156877 09/23/19 11:17 PM
Joined: Sep 2007 Posts: 844 Likes: 1 Los Angeles, California Steve Altonian Top 500 Poster
Steve Altonian Top 500 Poster Joined: Sep 2007 Posts: 844 Likes: 1 Los Angeles, California	Well Roy what can I say.... The first line of the Chorus sings the way I like my Chorus' to go...Because it soars....That is how I like for my CHORUS to be soaring,,,,, Wish I would have caught you and jane while you were writing this one, I would have encouraged a different storyline.... "Gone is the Wonderland" IMO would be a great innocence AND love lost song......And the TITLE says innocence without you using that word....And the music isn't melancholy, so it would work well... In any case great effort, & I LOVE THAT FIRST LINE of the CHORUS...That sucka' SINNNNNNGGGGGGSSSSS.... Steve Altonian---"I'll just do my best & let God do the rest" http://www.stevealtonian.com

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My first co-write since Helen	Roy Cooper	06/27/19 01:13 AM
Re: My first co-write since Helen	JAPOV	06/27/19 02:42 AM
Re: My first co-write since Helen	Roy Cooper	06/27/19 04:47 AM
Re: My first co-write since Helen	MFB III	06/27/19 11:58 AM
Re: My first co-write since Helen	Roy Cooper	06/27/19 03:36 PM
Re: My first co-write since Helen	Dave Rice (D)	06/27/19 01:08 PM
Re: My first co-write since Helen	Roy Cooper	06/27/19 07:38 PM
Re: My first co-write since Helen	Vicarn	06/27/19 02:10 PM
Re: My first co-write since Helen	Roy Cooper	06/27/19 07:43 PM
Re: My first co-write since Helen	Vicarn	06/27/19 08:22 PM
Re: My first co-write since Helen	Michael Zaneski	06/27/19 05:28 PM
Re: My first co-write since Helen	Roy Cooper	06/27/19 07:47 PM
Re: My first co-write since Helen	JaneK	06/27/19 09:41 PM
Re: My first co-write since Helen	JAPOV	06/27/19 11:27 PM
Re: My first co-write since Helen	JaneK	06/28/19 03:31 AM
Re: My first co-write since Helen	Roy Cooper	08/13/19 02:34 AM
Re: My first co-write since Helen	Vicarn	08/13/19 10:04 AM
Re: My first co-write since Helen	Roy Cooper	08/13/19 10:12 AM
Re: My first co-write since Helen	Vicarn	08/13/19 10:23 AM
Re: My first co-write since Helen	Roy Cooper	08/13/19 10:28 AM
Re: My first co-write since Helen	Gavin Sinclair	08/13/19 01:27 PM
Re: My first co-write since Helen	Roy Cooper	08/13/19 11:44 PM
Re: My first co-write since Helen	MFB III	08/14/19 12:59 AM
Re: My first co-write since Helen	Roy Cooper	08/14/19 07:29 AM
Re: My first co-write since Helen	JAPOV	08/14/19 03:01 AM
Re: My first co-write since Helen	Roy Cooper	08/14/19 07:32 AM
Re: My first co-write since Helen	MFB III	08/14/19 05:57 AM
Re: My first co-write since Helen	JaneK	08/14/19 06:45 PM
Re: My first co-write since Helen	JAPOV	08/14/19 07:26 PM
Re: My first co-write since Helen	Roy Cooper	08/15/19 02:12 AM
Re: My first co-write since Helen	MFB III	08/14/19 09:09 PM
Re: My first co-write since Helen	Roy Cooper	08/15/19 02:16 AM
Re: My first co-write since Helen	Deej56	08/15/19 03:48 AM
Re: My first co-write since Helen	Roy Cooper	08/15/19 04:19 AM
Re: My first co-write since Helen	Stephen John (singch	08/15/19 07:01 PM
Re: My first co-write since Helen	Roy Cooper	08/16/19 01:40 AM
Re: My first co-write since Helen	E Swartz	08/21/19 03:27 AM
Re: My first co-write since Helen	Roy Cooper	08/21/19 07:17 PM
Re: My first co-write since Helen - Our Video	Roy Cooper	09/03/19 03:47 AM
Re: My first co-write since Helen - Our Video	Gavin Sinclair	09/03/19 01:14 PM
Re: My first co-write since Helen - Our Video	Roy Cooper	09/03/19 03:39 PM
Re: My first co-write since Helen - Our Video	MFB III	09/16/19 11:54 AM
Re: My first co-write since Helen - Our Video	Roy Cooper	09/17/19 04:21 AM
Re: My first co-write since Helen - Our Video	niteshift (D)	09/17/19 11:16 AM
Re: My first co-write since Helen - Our Video	Roy Cooper	09/18/19 12:23 AM
Re: My first co-write since Helen - Our Video	John Lawrence Schick	09/18/19 12:34 AM
Re: My first co-write since Helen - Our Video	Roy Cooper	09/18/19 07:52 AM
Re: My first co-write since Helen - Our Video	GocartMoz	09/18/19 02:00 AM
Re: My first co-write since Helen - Our Video	Roy Cooper	09/19/19 06:07 AM
Re: My first co-write since Helen - Our Video	Travis david	09/19/19 09:04 AM
Re: My first co-write since Helen - Our Video	Roy Cooper	09/19/19 09:30 AM
Re: My first co-write since Helen - Our Video	Steve Altonian	09/24/19 03:17 AM
Re: My first co-write since Helen - Our Video	Roy Cooper	09/24/19 06:08 PM
Re: My first co-write since Helen - Our Video	JaneK	09/24/19 05:37 PM
Re: My first co-write since Helen - Our Video	Roy Cooper	09/25/19 07:23 AM
Re: My first co-write since Helen - Our Video	Dave Rice (D)	09/30/19 12:33 AM
Re: My first co-write since Helen - Our Video	Michael Zaneski	09/30/19 07:07 PM
Re: My first co-write since Helen - Our Video	Douglas Murphy	09/30/19 08:26 PM
Re: My first co-write since Helen - Our Video	JaneK	09/30/19 09:08 PM
Re: My first co-write since Helen - Our Video	Roy Cooper	10/01/19 06:10 AM
Re: My first co-write since Helen - Our Video	glynda	10/10/19 05:18 AM
Re: My first co-write since Helen - Our Video	Roy Cooper	10/11/19 07:45 AM

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