Originally Posted by Dave Rice
Hi Roy and Jane:

I brought an excuse for my prolonged absence, read the lyric again, then listened to the song while doing my best to ignore the video. A good song (to my ancient ears) should always sound good on "late night radio" when one is driving from Phoenix to El Paso and beyond... winging my way to West Mayberry.

Enjoyed every line and wish you both success with a well written song. Your male demo artist did yeoman's work.

Glad to be back "home" again. My latest procedure went well but I'm not "out of the woods" yet. Still writing, recording... and re-recording... LOL!

Thanks for sharing. Always good to hear from you.

----Dave


Thanks so much for stopping by and having a listen Dave, and I am so pleased that you liked our efforts. I'm pleased that you are home again, doing your thing.

God Bless to all

Roy


Originally Posted by Michael Zaneski
Hi Roy and Jane..

The re-write is really nice and I agree with Steve, the chorus is fantastic.

Roy, I applaud your stick-with-it-ness in getting the song right with re-writes. That's the mark of a diligent craftsman and you are that indeed. smile

Mike


WOW Mike, thanks so much for your positive words, and I am so pleased that you enjoyed our work.

God Bless to all

Roy


Originally Posted by Douglas Murphy
Hello Roy. Great lyric!

Douglas


Thanks for stopping by for a listen Douglas. I am very appreciative.

God Bless to all

Roy



Originally Posted by JaneK
Hi Dave - Welcome back -Thanks for the nice words on the song.

Thank you also Mike and Douglas for the listen and nice words - Roy's a perfectionist when it comes to lyric writing. He went all out on this one. Roy -Let's do another song!!! I need more lyrics!!!



I am probably obsessive Jane lol

It's strange how I often write a song in a couple of hours then typically spend 60 plus hours doing a re-write, that is often miles from the original lol

I am thinking of what to do next, and I will spend a while going over the other song we was working on.

God Bless to all

Roy

'You Have To Kiss A Lot Of Frogs To Find A Prince'