Originally Posted by Steve Altonian
Well Roy what can I say....

The first line of the Chorus sings the way I like my Chorus' to go...Because it soars....That is how I like for my CHORUS to be soaring,,,,,

Wish I would have caught you and jane while you were writing this one, I would have encouraged a different storyline....

"Gone is the Wonderland" IMO would be a great innocence AND love lost song......And the TITLE says innocence without you using that word....And the music isn't melancholy, so it would work well...

In any case great effort, & I LOVE THAT FIRST LINE of the CHORUS...That sucka' SINNNNNNGGGGGGSSSSS....


Thankis Steve for stopping by for a look/listen.

We are so pleased that you liked our song so much. You idea for the '"Gone is the Wonderland" would be a great innocence AND love lost song.' theme would work well as another song, and I may have a go at it and see what comes from it. If I do come up with something, I will let you know.

But as I say, it would be a totally different song lyrically.

thanks again

God Bless Roy

By the way Steve you have some great songs yourself and I have to say a great voice.


Last edited by Roy Cooper; 09/24/19 02:31 PM.
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