John he wants to see what im saying, because he wants to jump and try to intercept anything I say. Broken to him means,I see how totally useless and pointless fartin Martin is, and doesn't allow him to spread his uselessness to others.

Lovely song...is his new comment on TS he was a smug irritating baiting loser. Nothing has changed, except he now thinks hes worth something

The guy is in the words of the immortal bugs bunny, a maroon. Were on a songwriting site, and he wants nobody to comment on the song...only the recording, and his recording is probably worse than his songs.

He found a hobby he likes, and now tries to act like a model citizen. Hes so afraid hell be judge on the content of the song.

Im not talking nitpicking, im usually talking about the music. If the lyrics are at least coherent and get the job done, im not going to worry about that, i wrote mostly power pop, its very hard to cram alot of words into those smal spaces. I try, im not bernie taupin in that regard. But working on songs should be first and foremost.

He has been trying to put me in a bad light, but I know for a fact nobody is convinced..

And my friends call me Dom, you guys can call me wally

Last edited by Fdemetrio; 04/13/21 12:05 PM.