Originally Posted by Sunset Poet
"I don't wanna hear the same relentless gump
I don't want Mary Anne
She dropped me on my head and walked on every lump"

"but her weight was a ton
and if I didn't carry it all
well, let's just say she wasn't much fun"


That is terrible.
It is so bad, that it is good, at being bad.
An exemplary example of bad.
Not nearly as bad a "bowling ball eyes" from one of your other craft-works, but terrible nonetheless.

Marty, I suggest you learn abit about the genre.

This actually has a slight story to it, as opposed to most punk Rock.

Critique I wanna be sedated, or blitzkrieg bop, or should I stay or should I go, or
I bet you look good on the dance floor by artic monkeys, or last night by the strokes

Or wild thing, or what I like about you

You know old fart music,that's all you know.and as a juvenile punk song it's still better than anything you have offered.

Your just mad that some of your cronies and I now get along.

You have never produced anything this good.

Last edited by Fdemetrio; 11/12/25 09:41 PM.