HIDee Kids!

So Far, Great Job...BUT..it feels like a "Hook-less Song" to my More-Lyrically-Oriented Ears.

COULD be A HIT with bitta re-write, Just use that Fine Line ya only Used ONCE..."I'll Never Be Alone"..as a Refrain at end of each Verse. It's a KILLER Hook..

Good Luck to all...It's Definitely "Getin' There!"

JMO..K-O-S

Big Hugs,
Stan