Hi Kaley and Mike,

Thanks for giving us the go ahead here. It sounds like you might be stopping in from time to time so to let you know we will probably be continuing this conversation on PM between Sub and I and will always copy you. BIG question here:

Would the song fare better to move the structure from:

verse bridge verse interlude verse

To:

verse verse bridge interlude verse ??

I say this only because the bridge comes quickly and do we want the listener to wait for it just a little longer? I'd like all opinions here. Something to ponder. I'll go with what you two prefer, but I thought I'd raise the question.

Best,
Lynn
Upon further thinking, maybe not since the musical interlude acts as a lyrically silent 2nd bridge if you will. Thoughts???

Last edited by Lynn Orloff; 12/02/07 08:57 PM.
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