Hey Wy,

Well...okay, I put some changes up there, so it'd be great to know if I'm getting clearer or more vague! The message is intended to be more in the realm that that they don't believe in themselves... know who they are. It's sometimes hard to find that balance of a story and its message...so yeah, it's got a ways to go....I appreciate your feedback.

Kristi


A musician must make music, an artist must paint, a poet must write,
if he is to be ultimately at peace with himself. What a man can be,
he must be. -- Abraham Maslow, American Psychologist