Hey Stan,

Thanks for your input! I am hoping for a message to be "received" by the listener and am very happy this appeals to you on several wavelengths! So, are you saying that you understand the lifts in the blue version (“So before you toss it all away”) better than the ones in the dark green version? (“You’ve had enough. But you’ve got the stuff, just”). And those green ones change a little bit each time. I’m just curious because I changed those.

The “dreams still can come true” would fit and I like that…it’s very direct…“all about you” is slanted toward knowing themselves a bit in order to get to the dreams….hmmm…something to think about.

“Resolve” is one of those words, huh? lol “Courage” would also fit..

Thanks for your kind words, Stan! I so appreciate having your take on this little lyric here. You’re always very helpful! smile

Kristi

A musician must make music, an artist must paint, a poet must write,
if he is to be ultimately at peace with himself. What a man can be,
he must be. -- Abraham Maslow, American Psychologist