Hi Mike and thanks taking your time to give such an insightful critique of this song.

I'm no wizard or anything when it comes to song structure and don't know much about the whens and wheres concerning "pre-choruses" and the like. Most of my lyrical experience involves the standard verse chorus verse chorus bridge chorus structure. I have written some ballads and a few with tags at the end, but that is abut the extent of my knowledge when it comes to structure. I didn't write the whole lyric but did have a big part in it. The melody, vocals, chording, and composition is all Tammy.

I'm kind of surprized that you would point out the line "There's never been a love like you for me" as struggling the most. It is one that I think is very effective. Live and learn!

Thank you for your help. If we can get the people involved to give it another go, maybe some touch ups will be in order.

Thanks again,

Danny

The heart has its reasons, of which reason knows nothing of." —Blaise Pascal, 1670