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Lot Long
by Gary E. Andrews - 11/10/26 11:20 AM
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Joined: Apr 2001
Posts: 10,240
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Hi Tammy & Danny ...Nice to meet you and if I've said hi 'ways back ..and have forgotten, excuse please...  Very lovely vocals!...really nice! ... Nice Melody... and lyrics convey lovely emotion.... Maybe...dig a wee bit deeper lyrically y'all..... a few thoughts. I LOVE the thought the next two lines convey... There's never been a breath that I would ever want to hold Than swimming deep into your depths to quench my lonely soul (But I did read the comments this time..I don't always..)...and see what's being said about the Than... It would probably mess the meter up..but...how bout... There's never been a breath that I would ever want to hold.... Swimming deep into your depths I quench my lonely soul... I'm not sure the than worked in that spot... only other thought was....(and this is Nit pickin and personal preference) mebbe word replacement on one of the burns...or fire there's ...burn burning fire warmth in the Verse...and then followed up by warm fire burn in the chorus... Very nice you two... Enjoyed!!!! best wishes, Kaley
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