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Hello Kim. "Merry Christmas & Happy New Year!" To you too Douglas! "What do I like about this?" I like the images and the picture you painted. Your choice of words really created something to see. Whether or not you captured all the point of views that you tried to do I do not know. It reads/sings more from the point of view an adult who has lost their love. Which works. "What don't I like?" Nothing. It flows and it goes.  Congrads on the 3rd place. douglas Thanks, I may work on this one some more...especially if I can get someone to start a melody on it, usually once that happens, I end up making lyrical changes...especially if I take it to a songu class and a couch makes suggestions too...then I let 'er rip...;) I am glad you liked it. Kimberly
*Always open to collaborations on my lyrics.. with singers and musicians, but PLEASE contact me before putting work into one--in case someone else has it..thanks!!** BMI Member All Rights Reserved http://www.littleikepublishing.com Email for Song Business Only littleikeproductions@hotmail.com
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