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Hi Stan,

Thank you for looking this over for us. We are looking for input and you raise a valid point. The hook does seem perhaps clouded. It could be "remembering", "the smile" or "never be alone". We will have to try and zero in on what we want the hook to be. I am not sure if a hook in this genre has to be as strong as in say for instance a country song. I would guess that it would but wish I knew for sure. As I look what Mike used above from Josh Grobin it is clear the hook is "You Lift Me Up" for it is repeated almost incessantly (in a good way). Thanks for bringing the "hook" factor to our attention.

Best,
Lynn