Now that all the obvious nits (that weren't so obvious to this musically untrained ear grin ) have been mentioned, let me just say I loved the intensity and energy of this. Whatever Moker does to polish this up, I'm certain will be outstanding, but I could listen to it over and over just like it is.

And Tom, your lyric definitely struck a chord with me. Being a native Virginian, any references to the Blue Ridge Mountains and the Shenandoah River will always have my undivided attention. Some great lines and images in this, especially

DANCE OUR LOVE ALONG THE SURFACE OF THIS RIVERS RAIN

My hat's off to two fine writers. Thanks for the listen and the read.

Greg


If you don't eat your meat, you can't have any pudding.