Tom & Moker,

A really, really nice collab, guys! I'm on board with the vocal sounding marginally rushed. I think dropping it back as little as 4 - 6 bpm would make a huge difference with no negative effect whatsoever on the fluid progress of the melody.

Tye last line of the second verse...vocal was just a touch out of balance with the b/g music.

Other than those few little things, it's sounding great. Moker is a much better guitarist than many folks realize. I'm looking forward to the day when I can sit down and do little picking with him between sips of a cold Bud Select. And, of course, sitting down with you, Tom, and putting our heads together across the same table.

Nice job, indeed, guys!

Alan