my pleasure and honor to work with you Moker

you are truly one of the most talented somgwriters I know......I have had more than my share of luck for folks like you/Alan David/and Mike Dunbar to co-write with me......

yes-the double chorus will have to go-thats not something we can sell to Music Row......and it will allow you a bit more breathing room for slightly slower vocal delivery-without it going into the "drag zone".......your guitar work is really great!

even with those issues-this is very impressive Moker-the way you can just sit grab an hour and shoot something this good out...a very good worktape and I am sure the final demo will be something we get calls on from the Row..thanks again for a great job and working with little old me on this.....

Tom