funny thing i have 4 amps- 1 in the shop- 2 left at places i rehearse- and 1 lent out to another guitar player in one of my groups...ha...if i had only picked up my effects unit i could go through and straight to record...maybe next week...the spots you picked up on Mark i totally agree and knew it as i was recording it...my schedule has been so slammed lately i record worktapes when i get an hour ... i have some ideas for getting into the bridge and into the double chorus that i will use when i go back at this...i think a slight tempo change down will help but i don't wanna make it drag by doing so, there is a very fine line when it comes to tempo...the double chorus, although i think it's effective where it is in the arrangement will have to go on the demo version of this if the tempo makes the song too long...thanks for the comments and ideas...Tom , thanks for a great lyric to work with...mj