thanks for your listen and your comments Mark

Moker is indeed a great guitar player.....I have wanted to collab with him for a long time-glad we finally had the chance.......the vocals are a bit rushed.......a slower tempo might be in order....I think with a mix of both electric and accoustic (when Mokers amps get out of the shop) it will lend itself more to a slower tempo.....I am glad you enjoyed the "word pictures" effect...But I may have to trim back the lyrics a bit if that caused Moker to have to speed up in his vocals......we are both-I assure you-most open to any and all comments and suggestions on this worktape....I thank you for yours........

Tom