OK RICKI-i WILL CAVE

it is indeed a pretty good lyric-lol

glad you liked the haunting melody and Moker's excellant guitar work........yes you are right-that line is indeed a bit of a stretch...may be vain to say this-but I think this song has real potential for being picked up by Music Row......hope so anyway-as we all do for our songs......and if so Moker and I might be getting a call someday "hey so and so likes it but he wants to tweak a few things and be a third writer on it".......that often happens in Nashville......so if thats the case that line-or whatever-will be something he can work on to earn his co-write credit and money-lol.........very few demos are done exactly as is by the original writers.....so what you are hoping is that the demo will grab em enough to make em wanna adopt it-jump in and personalize it for their style......

thanks again-glad you enjoyed it

Tom