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Hi Tom & Moker, I like this one a lot, from the poetic lyrics to the haunting melody and, of course the awesome guitar. Just great work, all the way around. I think with practice, the lines can be sung smoother so I'm not sure it needs to be slowed down, but whatever works best for you. Only line I didn't buy was, "CAUSE WITHOUT IT INTO THE WATER OUR STONES DROP". Bit of a reach for the rhyme, eh? So, tell me Tom, how can someone who writes lines like, "RIDE MY LOVE INTO THE SETTING SUN" and "DANCE OUR LOVE ALONG THE SURFACE OF THIS RIVERS RAIN" and "BOUNCE OUR LOVE RIGHT UP TO A SHOOTING STAR", not get Diamond from Dust?  Ricki
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