good point Kevin

I must admit I was wondering myself about the flying/shooting star thing-even as I wrote it....but my thought pattern was to try to tie in the stones/and the river analogy to the universe in general....we always think of outer space as the universe.............but we are of course part of the universe......maybe that was a bit overly ambitious-though I do like challenges....so thanks for your observation on that..as with all other comments-it will be considered in the final lyric prior to the full bells and whistles demo..which I am even now thinking about hoW I will finance...(see Tom completely lose all shame and go down to the honkytonks area in his new "Midnight Cowboy" outfit.......but hey-its Nashville-you do what has to be done...

Tom