Originally Posted by JAPOV
I like it ...

But, Rob...

Do you really think that counts for anything on a "Songwriting Site"?
Do you really feel like you have accomplished something?

Mr. Williams, do you feel like you have accomplished something? You posted lyrics that weren't quite done yet. I made some suggestions how one could make a song out of it. This site is about songwriting. What you started is now a song. 10 years ago we would have called that a collaboration. Today you respond with a bunch of junk.