I'm not too much into the music of this post to judge either way.
I like rock and pop in general.
But I have followed few new acts.

The thing I notice though in lyrical threads and music in genral is how often lyrics will be changed to suit a rhyme, thus either taking away the impact of the meaning or not making sense.
Than there is the musicians in the name of lyrical honesty that try to pump too many lyrics into a verse.
It is great having the perfect fit with the honesty and verse structure.
I have scrapped ideas until I could do that.

http://www.f3music.com/444