Hmm....

For every line to stand on its own -

It needs a bone
It needs a home
A place to stand
and stand up straight
It needs to support its standing weight

What I, a man should need to stand
so should the song penned from my hand
The titles they should be the clues
The story it should be the shoes
The lines should each have single views
Headlines, subjects of the total news

A place to stand without the bone
Is just a pile on a stone
To stand up tall it will be seen
but to be noticed, it must me keen
Seen AND noticed makes it strong
That's the line to stand on my song

Should that line prove to be a sham
I will not write it Sam-I-Am

Cheers,

Rodney

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