I was gonna' post a different song but, on some input from a few E's, I decided it wasn't quite working. I'm not gonna' mention any names, but one ain't half as bad as she lets on, one I luckily caught between falls and the other is famous for radio play, (Reminds me, gotta' send some songs to Tracy.)
Thisn' might not be workin' either. Was wondering, could it be sung by either gender and which would be better?
What else ails it?
Wy
(BRIDGE ADDED)

Shirkin' My Workin'

V 1
It's work, work, work every day
Not even sure I'm gettin' ahead
Each check MEANS more bills to pay
DON'T PLAN TO work until I'm dead

V 2
This HONEY'S been hittin' on me
She asked why I was puttin' her off
Well tonight if the two of us agree
Cuttin' loose, not countin' the cost

C
I'm shirkin' my workin'
But doublin' my lovin'
The best things in life
Come free so they say
When you're shirkin' your workin'
And doublin' your lovin'
You really don't care anyway

V 3
Time to enjoy the finer things
Like exploring the opposite sex
'Course we could get carried away
But if we do,WELL what the heck

V 4
WITHOUT LOVE THE WORLD DOESN'T RHYME
IT'S WHAT MAKES THIS BLUE MATBLE SPIN
If it's not workin' the first time
Then I'm just gonna' try it again
C
I'm shirkin' my workin'
But doublin' my lovin'
The best things in life
Come free so they say
When you're shirkin' your workin'
And doublin' your lovin'
You really don't care anyway

B
YOU'RE WORTH EVERY PENNY I'M LOSIN' LIKE THIS
AND EVERY THOUSAND DOLLARS TOO
YOU CAN'T PUT A PRICE ON A HUG AND A KISS
I WAS MISSIN' A MILLION DOLLAR YOU

C
I'm shirkin' my workin'
But doublin' my lovin'
The best things in life
Come free so they say
When you're shirkin' your workin'
And doublin' your lovin'
You really don't care anyway






Last edited by Wyman Lloyd; 10/17/07 04:50 PM.