Ok, there's your hook..>"countin' down the days"...even has a nice bit of alliteration in there. I'd recommend you make it a story song though and it might even have a Christmassy theme to it. That way, it could be commercial...goodness knows we need some more new holiday songs.

Hugs,
Bobbie


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