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Ummmm Mudgie... Just thought since nobuddy else has pointed it out, that you have changed yer rhyme scheme in the last two verses. In V1 & V2, you are ABAB...in V3 & V4, you switch to ABCB..for whut it's worth.  Also might suggest: Cause' honey's been hittin' on me ASKIN' why I was puttin' her off Well tonite if she'll agree WE'LL BE (lots more 'literation) Cuttin' loose, not countin' the cost Line 3 also offers a stronger lead into line 4. Well, ol' Bobbelina is outta here now. Just hadda keep you in line...or try to! 'Tis a tough job! Hugs, Bobbie
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