Hi Wyman

Well I'm thinking this is just a nice upbeat fun write. The tweaking's workin....I wasn't bothered by the bridge, but I can see Bobbie's point of view. Maybe you can try on a not so perfect rhyme....

SHE's WORTH EVERY PENNY
I'M LOSIN' BY NOT WORKIN'
AND Each THOUSAND DOLLAR Bill
DIDN'T KNOW WHAT I WAS MISSIN'
TILL I STARTED SHIRKIN'
FOUND OUT I WAS MISSIN'
A MILLION DOLLAR Girl

Anyway, if you take a break from the board, I hope you keep lots of music projects going. Best to you ! smile jm


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