G'day Beth Of The Boo Boo's,
The "Bypass line", uh, yeah
" I thought that was the point, that you are SHIRKING your working so you CAN heat things up a bit....
---------Well, far be it from me to give advice, but possibly Tricia maybe should follow this guys example, uh, a little,
On the other hand, you "do" understand it-------but I won't follow up that line of thought.<G>
Cost---well, the thought was it was gonna' cost him big bucks to be shirkin' his work but he wasn't gonna' worry 'bout that. May have to make that plainer. Something like you have would probably work or, looking ahead, Derek wants a little more song so I'm thinking about a bridge and that could take care of it too. -
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"Then in verse three, to address the Opposite Sex issue, and also to bring in the work/not work business a bit more, how about going a different route....
--------Well, your verse would work too but I liked the "exploring the opposite sex" idea.I may try to work something lime that into the last 2 lines though.
Take care Bethsledge.
Are you listening? I said TAKE CARE!!!!!!
Thanks for the thoughts
Wy