You do have a point on the bridge Lynn
I rather like what I have "content-wise" but I think I'll try to cut out the words that've been used in the lyric.
It's also a longer bridge than I usually write. I generally stay down to two to four lines like they ordinarily recommend, but don't know if i can condense it or not.
Thanks for giving me your thoughts
Wy
(I remodeled the B)