Hi, Thunder Road, I understand your concern and desire to grow as a writer. I think we all want that. And, we do that from reviewing others' writing and the comments made about those lyrics. Sometimes, certain titles catch a person's eye and that is what they respond to. Perhaps, if you state'critique requested' when you post the title, you will get more response and suggested improvements. I think most of us want to support one another, but are hesitant sometimes to be too overt in offering suggestions; positive comments are a learning as well. And, you can always email someone if you have other questions regarding their comments....or if you admire the way they approach topics. Keep posting, Jeannette


"Live as though you were going to die tomorrow; learn as though you will live forever." Ghandi

Jeannette