Originally Posted by Ray E. Strode
Beauty is STILL in the eye of the Beholder. What I may think is great you may not.

A couple of songs that were hits that I thought SUCKED were:
CANDY MAN and ELVIRA. WOLVERTON MOUNTAIN was another.

YESTERDAY by the Beatles is a pretty good song. BUT, A WALK IN THE BLACK FORREST is a great song!


The question wasnt if it was great or not.

the question was is it clear and focused. I outline in detail why it is not, kev decided to ignore it and say to HIM, its focused.

Talking about the kind of things a publisher might reject a song, for its lack of craft in its focus.

I already said I think its a great song, provocative and good meklody and the guitar hook is great.

As a lyric Its not clear. thats easy to see if u want to.