Originally Posted by Kevin Emmrich
You sort of left out the two transitional stanzas in your analysis, but that's OK -- you're convinced on your viewpoint. The fact that you can't grasp the chronology doesn't mean that it is not there.

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...shes runs through scenes kind of whimsically, it wouldnt fly on for a writer trying to get published.
for an artist, they can write how and what they want...

Hey, we agree on something! This song was not written for someone else to record -- it's an artist song. Just because it is not "publisher" material has no real bearing on any argument about craft.


very clever. But that IS partly what makes a song greatly crafted. one of the basic things u learn when studying songwriting, or taking a course, is that your song should not flip around, it should have on cohesive linear storyline.

I would call this song more artistic than crafted.

we were talking great craft.

Like Bill oreilly, ill give you the last word, if you wish to opine.

LOL


Last edited by December Rock Star; 08/12/12 07:50 PM.