You sort of left out the two transitional stanzas in your analysis, but that's OK -- you're convinced on your viewpoint. The fact that you can't grasp the chronology doesn't mean that it is not there.

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...shes runs through scenes kind of whimsically, it wouldnt fly on for a writer trying to get published.
for an artist, they can write how and what they want...

Hey, we agree on something! This song was not written for someone else to record -- it's an artist song. Just because it is not "publisher" material has no real bearing on any argument about craft.

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