Originally Posted by John Voorpostel
I'm under 70, play and write, and here is my latest....posted here just to say you are not right in how you see this place




Thank You Eve
© 2024 John Voorpostel

Thank you Eve, for eating that apple
Thank you Lord for bringing us sin
Thank you Lord for conscious awareness
Thank you Lord for letting us sing

Thank you Lord for giving us serpents
Serpents are needed for setting the rules
Our minds and memories aware imaginations
Say thank you Lord for Eve as your tool

Thank you Eve we will always remember
The Bible told us men misunderstood
Thought you were some simple rib grown companion
Could never become the awesome Eve of our song

Thank you Eve, for eating that apple
Thank you Lord for bringing us sin
Thank you Lord for conscious awareness
Thank you Lord for letting us sing

Lord we are yours there’s devils in details
To you we surrender our souls for all time
Thank you Lord for our conscious awareness
To you we surrender our souls and our rhymes

Thank you Eve we will always remember
The Bible told us men misunderstood
Thought you were some simple rib grown companion
Could never become the awesome Eve of our song

Lord we are yours there’s devils in details
To you we surrender our souls for all time
Thank you Lord for our conscious awareness
To you we surrender our souls and our rhymes

Your problem is you don't mind mouthing off to me, look what this idiot typed? Is that somehow ok?

Make sure your consistent, then maybe I'll listen

Originally Posted by bennash
Top search for songwriting forum and we got 5 people that bicker over old rock stars, AI , (Politics which people hate ) and religion . I guess only 2 people play guitar Tony and I.... the rest of the 9k members that are missing use robots and praise new technology including Brian . But no worries your life will change cuz another crook is running the world , we fondly call him the 666 guy cuz pot roast is going down .

Well I got 9% of life left so let's cut another song. I'll think I'll skip Clapton hates somebody else .