Originally Posted by JAPOV
Originally Posted by John Voorpostel
Love it...can I add some revisions you can work through SUNO....well assuming you think it's worth the change


They don’t need proof, don’t need facts
Just a microphone and some lies to pass

yeah bullies lead the loud


Got a bible on the dash, with an uncracked spine
A cross on the mirror, judgment in their eyes


Praying love and peace they vote for war
Their Golden Rule is lock the door

Sermons dressed in cable news
Faith believes that others lose

...Question the king that's blasphemy


then Ben that prechorus

It ain’t about God, it ain’t about right
It’s about feelin’ chosen in a barroom fight

is just about the best couplet I have read in a long time and just so you know I am stealing it
aside.....I brought a UN initiative.... World Interfaith Harmony Week....to Toronto in 2013 and still co chair the steering committee here. As such I get asked to say a few words at WIHW events.
That couplet will make its way into those words in some way

The bridge is so core.....mankind invokes God to justify their misdeeds ....

then another brilliant pre chorus...........

more suggestions...

They found Orange Jesus, bigger than God
Pardons your sins as long as you nod
Truth’s just a rumor, power’s the prize
Speed of light lies on the tube every night
Truth is submerged by fear in the thesis
I don’t blame heaven — I blame the preachers
Rest easy my soul, and you keep the pieces
That fall by the wayside as His Majestee pleases

I like to think that Jesus offers forgiveness to any man that Muhammad recruits to kill for Allah. What kind of God needs His own children to wage war in defense of heaven anyway? All those bearded virgins must be driving Allah insane...

What kind of God asks a man to kill his only son?

"God said to Abraham, kill me a Son, Abe said man, yiu must be putting me on"

Last edited by Fdemetrio; 02/04/26 03:28 PM.