Originally Posted by Sunset Poet
Paraphrasing George Strait,

"I always have my favorites and the ones that I think should be hits when we release an album. But I can never predict which are going to be the favorites of my audiences."

That is spoken by someone who has miles of real world trial-and-error experience.
If Strait, called me up and said write a song for my next album.
I would try hard to right the best one that I could.

If he came back and said, it doesn't work for my brand for several reasons, I would take notes on what the reasons were and hang on every word.
If some amateur from NJ tells me why my songs "suck," ....I wonder to myself...how would he know?
From what experience and knowledge base would he be sourcing all of his tips and advice for hit songs.

None

Nobody can predict what song will be a hit.

That doesn't mean that there's no skill or knowledge involved in songwriting.

Your talking that art is about money, nobody here and for that matter anywhere else is making money with music, only the elite lucky few, where it doesn't matter anyway if a song is good.

Put it this way, what purpose are you serving posting a song here?