Dear Mr. Publisher,

Please review my song [color:#660000][size:14pt]Naked In The Rain[/size][/color]. It would be perfect for someone in the singer/songwriter vein.


Naked In The Rain Copyright ©2009 Colin Ward

V1
I was happy before I met you,
But then you came along,
Now I worry constantly,
That one day you'll be gone
On your way
Leaving me naked in the rain

V2
All the time you're in my brain,
You've pushed the rest aside,
I'm not thinking clearly now,
Your face has fogged my mind,
To shades of gray,
Don't leave me naked in the rain

Ch
So now my life is full of joy,
I should not worry so,
I'm taking risks and might fall down,
I'll go crazy if you go,
Don't leave me naked in the rain

Instrumental

Br
I don't know what you think of me,
Whether I can capture your heart,
You had a life when you came my way,
But I thought I saw a sparkle,
In your eyes,
Don't leave me naked in the rain

V3
I was happy before I met you,
But you spun my world around,
I'll fall right off the edge,
If we're on shaky ground,
So you've gotta stay,
Don't leave me naked in the rain

Chorus

Tag

Don't leave me naked in the rain
repeat

Colin

I try to critique as if you mean business.....

http://colinwardmusic.com/

http://rosewoodcreekband.com/