Originally Posted by Mike Caro Substudio
Originally Posted by Neil Cotton
SAY WHEN (Cotton, Heinzelman, Moon)

http://tunesmithpro.ning.com/profile/NeilCotton Song #3
Player is in the left margin, halfway down the page

Let’s stay in bed, leave the covers on the floor
Right where we tossed ‘em the night before
Don’t worry about the sun peaking through the shades
We’ll close our eyes and let time fade away
Again…..

Say when
When you need my love
And you want a tender touch
Say when
And I’ll start each day
Loving you this way
All you have to do is..
say when


No need to rush, we got no place to go
Let’s cuddle up and get real close
There’s nothing that I’d rather do
Than lay here all day touching you
Again….

Say when
When you need my love
And you want a tender touch
Say when
And I’ll start each day
Loving you this way
All you have to do is..
say when

Baby just one word from you
Is all it takes


Say when
When you need my love
And you want a tender touch
Say when
And I’ll start each day
Loving you this way

All you have to do is..
say when

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Neil Cotton 905-873-2637
Email: cottonneil@hotmail.com


Neil Cotton
JPF Boards

Hi Neil,

Thanks for submitting. I listened to "Say When"
I liked it. It was smooth and catchy, well arranged and nicely done. It had a slightly older feel about it, not that old maybe 80's early 90's. Reminded me of Restless Heart which I really like. Someone else submitted a song recently aiming it towards Adult Contemporary and kind of missed the mark, this to me is Adult Contemporary.

I'm unsure about it at this point, and want to give it the test.
That is simply seeing if it pops back into my head later on and or tomorrow. It may not be a hit single right now but it would definitely make a strong album cut.

Usually all we want is top hits and not album cuts,but I'm personally liking something about this so let's see, and an album cut is not a bad thing.

Thanks
Mr Knowitall
Sublevel Music NYC


Thank you sir for your assessment. I'm pleased you have a feel for an intended audience.I look forward to hearing the results of the "test". wink

Have a great day.
Neil

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