Originally Posted by in2piano
Hey Big Dog Music...(err..Toby Keith...err...Mike)

While I know you have a great stable of writer's (including yourself) I would simply submit the following...Your recent hit "American Ride" should be witness to outside writer's who can still pen a hit...

Respectfully....

Larry
P.S. I didn't send the music for this as I think the lyrics can be interpreted in several ways...I do have very capable people in NYC than can make this tune a big hit..but I know you are more than ready to make this girl rock...


Fate Met Destiny

She was a small town girl
Who just happened to love
A big city boy
Her daddy didn’t
Think much of
She had a sheltered life
Not much of a home
Two hell-bent hearts
That were ready to roam....
Into eternity

CHORUS

They were free spirits
And backseat lovers
With the whole world
Out there to discover
They thought…they had it all covered
Until fate met destiny
Some things weren’t meant to be

Burnin up the road
Two hearts on fire
But flashing lights up ahead
Put the brakes on their desire
In a stolen car
The spike-strips caught a tire (The law shot out a tire?)
It all came to a halt
On the Alabama border

(Instrumental)

They were free spirits
And backseat lovers
With the whole world
Out there to discover
They thought…they had it all covered
Until fate met destiny
Some things weren’t meant to be


Reaching in his jeans to pull out his wallet
Side by side in too big a hurry
Then shots rang out
Things got a little blurry
In each others arms for the very last time
Livin life on the edge
But they paid for the crime
Yeah they paid for the crime

Because they were free spirits
And backseat lovers
With the whole world
Out there to discover
They thought…they had it all covered
Until fate met destiny
Some things weren’t meant to be
Oh some things just weren’t meant to be

© 2009 Larry Westfall


Larry
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Dear Larry

Thanks for the recent submission. Sorry to say that I'm pretty useless with songs without any music,so I can't make a fair assessment of "Fate Met Destiny" as a song.
On the lyrical aspect I did appreciate the work that when into it and see you have a nice story development here.

It is a styled story/tale song that would lead it to Country Music. "Fate Met Destiny" on the Country mainstream charts now?
I'm unsure, but without music that would be "definitely not"

Thanks
Mr Knowitall
Sublevel Music NYC

Thanks!
Peace Mike
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