To Kevin Emmrich
JPF MP3 Boards

Thanks for your submission. The demo had a solid sound. Unfortunately were not able to use "Clap Of Thunder"
Our bands have no need for outside material at this time.

On a constructive note I just wanted to add, that you have a nice arrangement here. The chorus could have been more effective and the message could have related more on a personal level.
The mystery of what hit you may have been more effective revealing itself at some point to the listener perhaps.
So the subject matter would be more relate-able.

Also saxophone gave a dated feeling to the song right off the bat.

Thanks for considering us and all the best in the future.

Mike Knowitall
Sublevel Music NYC

Thanks!
Peace Mike
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