Tony Atkinson
JPF Mp3 Boards

Hello Tony

Thanks for submitting and your well received letter.
The song sounded nice,but unfortunately sorry to say it needs a lot of work internally.
The lyrics for one really really need to be a lot more substantial.

And the melody was not grabbing or holding enough. The chorus wasn't strong or moving in either regard.
All of this was very obvious withing thirty seconds and it would have been nicer to have it looked at an considered before investing into the project.

It is good however to finish a song, and take it to the next stages recording,submitting etc..
I hope you can learn from the whole experience,as I'm sure you will. Because when you really learn something then nothing and no time was wasted.

Thanks for considering us
All the Best
Mr. Knowitall
Sublevel Music NYC


Thanks!
Peace Mike
Sub

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