Originally Posted by Everett Adams
I think I will toss in a tune to get a little feed back too.

Everett



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HAPPY BIRTHDAY DARLING.

SO THIS IS YOUR BIRTHDAY
MANY HAPPY RETURNS
MAY IT BE SO JOYOUS
WITH LITTLE CONCERNS

MAY ALL YOUR WISHES COME TRUE
WHEN YOU BLOW OUT THE FLAME
YES HAPPY BIRTHDAY DARLING
IN MORE THAN JUST NAME

CHORUS

YES HAPPY BIRTHDAY DARLING
I WISH YOU MANY MORE
MAY YOU ALWAYS BE HAPPY
MAY YOU NEVER BE POOR

I PRAY TIME TREATS YOU KINDLY
LIKE IT HAS IN THE PAST
MAY YOUR TROUBLES BE FLEETING
MAY YOUR PLEASURES HOLD FAST

(INSTRUMENTAL BREAK)

YES THIS IS A MILESTONE
ON YOUR JOURNEY THROUGH LIFE
BE IT ALWAYS HAPPY
WITH NO CAUSE FOR STRIFE

MANY LITTLE PLEASURES
I WISH ONLY FOR YOU
YES HAPPY BIRTHDAY DARLING
AS YOUR DREAMS COME TRUE

REPEAT CHORUS TWICE (rising higher on second repeat)





Everett Adams
JPF Mp3 Board

Dear Everett,

Thanks for submitting "Happy Birthday Darling"
The demo sounded good and the song had warm genuine sentiments.
It had a feeling to it like if a star from the past had a hit with it and played it at each concert for gracious and loyal fans.
Had a very traditional way about the whole song approach, being it near the holidays the first thing to come to mind was John Lennon's singing "and so this is Christmas"

Heartfelt,well written and well done Everett,but not really something we can use in today's market.

Thanks
Sincerely
MR Knowitall
Sublevel Music NYC

Thanks!
Peace Mike
Sub

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