Thank you very much for your time and comments Mike. There have been quite a few comments from other songwriters about the song lyrically coming up short. Seeing as that is my main contribution to this song, I was willing to consider it. But my co-writers insisted that they were happy with it as is. This has already been accepted by an artist development agency as a song they will shop to up and comers... That's not a hit by any stretch of the imagination... but it does assure me, as you say, that we are not far off... Thanks again!

Greg