Originally Posted by Brenda152
So sorry for the inconvenience, the jamwave site was down the day I posted this one. I'm re-posting it here with a new link. Thank you and again, my apologies!

www.jamwave.com/brendamcbryde

Get To Your Heart
written by: James Ryce/Brenda McBryde
2009

I keep waiting for a day that never comes
And I keep pretending there's love when there's none
I always let you go to watch you fly
But it's better then saying goodbye

I can't get to your heart though for years you know I've tried
And you can't force a feeling and still be satisfied
You know that I would beg and plead, to hell with lovers pride
I can't get to your heart, but I can't say goodbye

You call me with plans so mine get rearranged
Then later you tell me your mind has changed
And even when my heart gets cast aside
Its still better then saying goodbye

I can't get to your heart though for years you know I've tried
And you can't force a feeling and still be satisfied
You know that I would beg and plead, to hell with lovers pride
I can't get to your heart, but I can't say goodbye


Everyone has to finally draw the line
When there's no hope left in sight
I'll let the light of a new day shine
I guess I'm saying goodbye


I can't get to your heart so I'll just say goodbye
'Cause you can't force a feeling and still be satisfied
I'll no longer beg and plead, I'll hang on to my pride
I might get to your heart, when you hear me say goodbye

yeah, I might get to your heart, when you hear me say goodbye



Brenda Mcbryde
JPF Mp3 Boards


Dear Brenda

Thanks for the recent submission. Listened to "Get To Your Heart"
Although it was well written and heart felt it did not stand out enough in any particular way, too be a chart placer.

The melody needed more glue, and the lyric didn't pop.
The three main aspects, the melody,lyrics,rhythm/feel all were too plain and sat there too safely.

It's just not strong enough. Wish I had more to offer and I hope the best for you in the future.

Sincerely
Mr Mkowitall
Sublevel Music


Thanks!
Peace Mike
Sub

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