But while submissions are still open,
I would love feedback on this song.
it is just guitar and vocals at this time, (so easy to make any changes). odviously a ballad, other than that I could go any direction with it.

"felt you all night"
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1st
The kiss that lasted all night, dripping deep into my soul.
I know I’m not supposed to jump, but I went ahead anyway.

(Chorus)
I felt you all night, and I laid with you alone, I felt you all night.
But now I know it’s just a dream, * I’m going back to start my life.

2nd
The ebb & flow I shared with you, like the waves beating on the shore.
Your kiss I won’t forget and the fire that it lit.

(Repeat first chorus*)

(End chorus)
But I felt you all night, and I laid with you alone,
and I felt you all night. But now I know it’s just a dream,
and I’ve gone back to start my life

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